for the first ten readers!

The first TEN people to get in touch, can get their first chapter critiqued for just £15 !!!

Get in touch NOW!

I will happily critique your first chapter for you, for a small fee. I currently have 14 romances traditionally published and have been a finalist in the RoNA Rose Award for two years running.

  • Your first chapter must not be more than 10 pages

  • It must be your FIRST chapter

  • You may accompany it with a short synopsis, so that I have an idea for the way you hope the story will go, if you so wish, but this is optional

  • You must first contact me, using my Contact page, to make sure I have an open slot coming up. Bear in mind that I am also a writer and so will have times when I will be busy with my own work and may not be able to fit you in

  • When booked, I promise to respond to your submitted chapter within one month of submission with a written report of what I think is working well and what needs rethinking. 

  • You are welcome to submit more than one work, but each story will require the same fee of £25

  • The fee is £25 for one chapter

  • Works are to be sent by email only

  • Payment is to be done through Paypal, that protects both you and me

  • If you have any questions about this process, then please contact me through my Contact page

  • A chapter critique will not guarantee you publication. I am only critiquing your first chapter, the rest is up to you. 


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